Preliminary one.. Evaluation

EVALUATIONThere are lots of problems with this piece. The lighting is slightly wrong when it comes to the midshots of just Hayley (the girl in the office) and you can barely see her face. There is also problems with the way that we did leave a long enough pause after they spoke and therefore we were forced to cut it and edit it in a way that it makes it way too quick. There is also a reflection that can be seen on the whiteboard. Another problem is not all that the actors say is audible. We did make some alteration when it comes to the over the head shot, we went for a high angle shot instead because it manages to give a slightly dutch angle that I think really captures the shot in a much better way. We have decided to remake the preliminary.